tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5501443588005642605.post3662090053010389625..comments2023-10-22T06:29:29.201-07:00Comments on ELYDEN - worldbuilding, cartography and conlanging in the world of Elyden: NaNoWriMo - updateVorropohaiahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07297798747914763542noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5501443588005642605.post-1716507587176355522012-11-03T11:41:02.827-07:002012-11-03T11:41:02.827-07:00Thanks much for the comments, I often worry about ...Thanks much for the comments, I often worry about too much exposition, so good to hear someone thinks it's done well :)Vorropohaiahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07297798747914763542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5501443588005642605.post-71408380002101793012012-11-03T08:23:37.820-07:002012-11-03T08:23:37.820-07:00Excellent! You nailed the tension of the conversat...Excellent! You nailed the tension of the conversation and Slaven's frustration with the Tahlib never getting to the point. You inject history very well (you always do) without making it seem like exposition. Your physical descriptions are great.Realmwrighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12025487066357949785noreply@blogger.com